Sunday, March 9, 2014

#9 When I Get to Michigan, I Get a Warm Fuzzy Feeling


Michigan is Awesome
#9
                     
Many people might  think Michigan isn’t the best state, but I think it is one of the best states ever!!! When I get to Michigan I get a warm fuzzy feeling when we play or go to Potoski or when I see my cousins. Because it is really fun for me, because I only get to see Michigan a couple of times a year.

For example when I get to Michigan I get a warm fuzzy feeling when we play, one time in Michigan a couple of people were passing the football then almost the WHOLE cottage was playing. We were passing and running touchdowns. One time I saw the ball when no one else saw it. I went around the cottage and ran a TOUCHDOWN! In second quarter we jumped in the lake with our clothes on!!!!!! IT WAS AWESOME! The game we played was called deathball. When I get to Michigan I get a warm fuzzy feeling. For instance when we play awesome games like with lightsabers, and we played a game with a stick a couple feet away from their swing set and thought of a color. Then we told the other people our color, and then the person near the stick guessed colors, then if he gets one person’s color they have to run around the stick without getting tagged. When we do games like this it is very fun.

When I get to Michigan I get a warm fuzzy feeling when I see my cousins. For example, one time in Michigan we were tubing, I was on the tube with my cousins Jacob, Caiden and me were tubing around, and like the wind I fell off, but any way they were so far away!! They couldn't hear me! Or the motor of the boat but they were far away! Then my dad saw me and they went back to get me. I have found Jacob is fun and creative. James is cool and likes legos. Caiden is awesome and has a LOT of legos. Lucia is fun and cool. lexi is creative and good at giant find the backpack game, it is where we have backpacks and the offending team hides the backpack and you have to get it without getting hit with a Nerf gun. Aunt Cheri is cool and makes awesome meals. Uncle Jon is fun and makes good stories. Charlie is cool and very creative.
 
For example,  when I get to Michigan I get a warm fuzzy feeling when we go to Potoski for example at Potoski off the wake zone there is a restaurant that we dock next to. Inside the restaurant there is a platform and a higher platform, connected to the smaller platform that we jump off and we dance on the platform too. Also every year we go to Potoski and get ice cream we go to a little place near by, it has some toys and a lot of picnic benches, and one has a wood cover over some wood benches and a plastic cover and plastic benches, and it has a swinging chair and a little wishing fountain with a little hole with running water going through it, and you can put a penny through it and it was awesome! When we get ice cream in Potoski I get a warm fuzzy feeling.

I realize when I get to Michigan I have some of the best times ever and I bet my cousins think that too.  

9 comments:

  1. Very convincing tone! It makes me want to visit Michigan!

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    Mrs.G

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  2. I like how you gave great reason like that you can play with your friends,And Described what you can do to play

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  3. it is a good essay because you described it very very well, my young padowan -vic

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  4. I want to go to Michigan now great essay.

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  5. Great essay! Liked all the examples and all the positive qualities of your cousins & uncle! Gave me warm fuzzy feelings too!

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  6. Hi Nicky! I like your essay! It makes me happy that you really enjoy spending time with our cousins!

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  7. Great job on your essay - you have some fun times in Michigan! Glad to hear that it's worth the long, long, long drive!

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