Friends Make Me More Comfortable
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#4
Sometimes in life friends can’t be broken apart. And if you are apart, you’re still together because you’re still best friends. This happend to me once. It happened to me when I was 9 years old. The reason why I was pulled apart from my friend is because I was moving. That’s why friends make me more comfortable. Friends make me more comfortable when I’m the new kid in school. Friends make me more comfortable when I’m sad. Friends make me more comfortable when someone is bullying me.
Friends make me more comfortable when I’m the new kid in school. One example that shows this is on the first day of school at recess I was alone, then Lisa came up to me, we started talking to each other, then we played together. I felt happy when I met Lisa because if I wouldn’t of met her I wouldn’t have a new best friend. Over the past months me and Lisa have had some stuff in common, like us having the same middle name and not liking math. I also was happy because I could tell her some of my secrets (which I did) and she could tell me some of her secrets (which she did). I’m glad that I have a friend like Lisa. For instance I didn’t have a partner in gym, then me and Sarah walked up to each other, I asked her if I could be her partner, and she asked if she could be my partner, then I said yes.
Friends make me more comfortable when I’m sad. Like for example, one time I was sitting on a bench and I was really sad because I thought a friend didn’t like me, and Lisa was right next to me. Having Lisa as a friend is like having another sister. Also when I’m sad friends make me more comfortable because if me and my friends talk about something really funny, my friend would talk me out of my sadness. When I’m sad friends make me more comfortable because if me and my friend was doing something really fun, playing that fun game would make me feel better. In addition to this is that friends make me more comfortable when I have no friends. friends make me more comfortable when I have no one to sit with at lunch. friends make me more comfortable when I don’t have a partner for gym. Friends make me more comfortable when someone yells at me. Friends make me more comfortable when I’m sad. Friends make me more comfortable when someone tells a teacher about something bad I did (that I actually didn’t do).
Friends make me more comfortable when someone is bullying me. In addition to this is that, my friend would see what the bully is doing, then get help from a teacher, I don’t have a memory for this story but I can tell you a fact friends are like another sibling and friends are helpful. Also friends make me more comfortable when someone is mean to me like a bully or something.
What people need to know is that friends aren’t always breakable. I realize that friends make me more comfortable because if I were alone I would still be lonely, I wouldn’t have anyone to talk to. friends are fun to sing with, dance with, and talk to. If I didn’t have friends by now that would tell me that people don’t really like me. That’s why friends make me more comfortable. Friends are also fun to have friends are also fun to have play dates and sleepover with.
I liked how you talked about the importance of both new and old friends. You're mini-stories made your essay come to life!
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Mrs.G
I loved your essay you are a great writer.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the examples you shared in your writing. It is hard to be a new student and so glad you have met new friends. I am glad you attend this school. You are a good friend too.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave VERY good examples and how you convinced me that your thesis is true.
ReplyDeletegood job(;
ReplyDeleteYour essay is very true and if you ever need a hug or laugh come to me.
ReplyDeletethanks Meredith!
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