#18 Dogs Are Like Friends But With a Lot of Hair


Dogs Are Like Friends But With a Lot of Hair

#18


People need to know that dogs can be everyones best friend by helping you. They can help you if you are blind or hurt. Dogs are like friends but with a lot of hair because you can play with them and because they protect you and because they can make you happy.

One reason that dog‘s are like friends is because you can play with them. One example that dogs are like friends is when I played with my Aunt Susie’s Siberian Husky like you would play with friends. One example that shows this is you can play catch with a friend and a dog.
you can play tag with a dog and a friend.

One reason that dogs are like friends but with a lot of hair is because they can protect you. One example that shows how my dog protected me was when my brother tried to hurt me or like when my friend protected me from a mean guy. And also when my dog protected me from a stajyer on a walk. And another reason is when my friend protected me from a river.

One reason that dogs are like friends but with a lot of hair is because they can make you happy by spending the night with you as a sleepover. Or like when my friend came over I was so HAPPY because I was bored we played on the xbox, ipad, computer, kindle, and we also went ice skating, and then went to sleep. My dog Nico made me happy by playing with me when
I was sad. And like when my friend made me happy when I was hurt.

The next time you see a dog think of my story dogs are friends but with alot of hair it may make you want to buy a dog ps I. Think a golden retriever is best dog but don’t ask me buy one yourself and golden retrievers are friendly!

11 comments:

  1. You have a very creative thesis statement! I like the simile!

    From,
    Mrs.G

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  2. i like your essay about your dog. It has really good reasons to!

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  3. Hi chase you had the most powerful essay i've checked so far!

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  4. Good job, true statement. I would like your dog.

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  5. Love your title! Caught my attention & made me laugh!

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  6. I really liked your thesis statement! I completely agree that dogs are like hairy friends!
    :) Miss R

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  7. Your title is great.

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  8. I really enjoyed reading about dogs!

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  9. Your essay is great #18

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  10. I liked how you supported your reasons. P.S I think Golden Retrievers are the best too!

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  11. I totally agree! Dogs are a persons best friend!!!!!!!

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