My Older Sister Is Selfish
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I used to think that having an older sister would be awesome. But now I think it is very boring. My older sister is selfish just like that. She doesn't play with me, She gets very grumpy and lastly she plays on her computer all day. Many kids struggle with older sisters.
One reason that my older sister is selfish is she doesn't play with me. For instance she rolled her eyes at me and shewed me out of her room, because I wanted to play with her. It made me feel mad and disappointed, That is one way she doesn't play with me. In addition I remember when it was my birthday and Sarah came to my party. We were gonna play musical chairs with her. She said “No” but mommy said “fine no cake” so Sarah played. But she only played so she could get cake! That is one way she doesn't play with me. Also On wednesday my sister got a complex restaurant lego set. I wanted to play with her so I went into her room and asked “Can I play?” Sarah replied “NO DO NOT TOUCH ANYTHING!!!!!!” That was one the reason I cant play with her.
Another reason that my older sister is selfish is that she gets very grumpy. One example that shows this is I remember when we had Cerria and Chase over. Sarah got all upset when mommy said “bedtime.” And Sarah screeched “no I am not going to bed!” so after that Cerria and Chase went home, That is how she is very grumpy. Another example that shows this is she gets very grumpy when one time: My sister got home from school and I said “do all your chores even mine!” Sarah asked “why do yours?” I replied “mommy said so.” Sarah yelled “YOU'RE LYING!” she called mommy and mommy said “ I told her to tell you.” That is one reason she gets very grumpy. Also My older sister is VERY grumpy. For example: Yesterday night me and my sister were watching tv and mommy asked “What are you watching?” But Sarah couldn’t hear her. So mommy said “well since nobody is answering turn the tv off.” Than Sarah screamed “NO” at mommy and she ran up stairs and slammed her door so hard the lock broke! Me and mommy started to laugh. Then Sarah ran out the door. That was one example why my sister gets very grumpy.
My last reason that my older sister is selfish is she plays on her computer all day. for example she plays on her computer all day, for example: She plays minecraft, reads manga, and plays tiny deathstar. I don't have those things. That is why she plays on her computer all day. Another example is she plays on her computer all day, One time I: Went into her room and asked “Do you want to play with me?” Sarah said “ Of course not. I’m playing on my computer, and you can’t stop me.” That is one reason why she plays on her computer all day. Also My sister plays on her computer all day for example: One time it was family movie night and we said “You will love this movie Sarah!” Sarah shouted “NO I AM NOT WATCHING A MOVIE I WILL PLAY ON MY COMPUTER!!!” “fINE” mommy told her “But when your time runs out you stay in your room. Got it?” “yes” Replied Sarah. But when she logged on her computer she had no time so she couldn't play. That was one way that my sister plays on her computer all day.
It is true that my older sister is selfish. I think now almost everyone is selfish. But isn’t it TRUE that in general teenagers are selfish?
You wrote with a convincing tone, and your mini-stories supported your thesis well! I liked your connection to the big picture in the end about teenagers!
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I like the picture of the girl looking selfish.
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DeleteNO DO NOT TOUCH ANYTHING!!!!! nice!
ReplyDeleteI have an older sister thats not a teenager anymore but sometimes she was Selfish
ReplyDeleteGood point!
DeleteYou wrote a very good story. I like that you gave strong examples. I am sorry that you feel all teenagers are grumpy. They are not all grumpy. Give her a chance. One day you will be a teenager too.
ReplyDeleteHang in there, some day you will probably be best friends. Many siblings don't get along great at times, but that will change. You used great specific examples in your essay.
ReplyDeleteI like how you keep trying to be sister-friends! Someday you will!
ReplyDeleteI know how you feel I can really relate great job.
ReplyDeleteI agree! I learned a lot
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